假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,2．题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I took part in a international English speech contest and win a prize. As a result, I offered a chance to visit Paris. Paris is one of my most favorite cities and I had dreamed of go there for a long time.

Firstly, I visited the magnificent Eiffel Tower. Then I went to the Louvre, that I enjoyed a lot of world-famous work, such as Leonardo da Vinci’s masterpiece Mona Lisa. I also enjoyed the sights of the Arch of Triumph, which is regarded for the symbol of France.

I also spent some time look around and experiencing the unique culture in Paris, which great enriched my life.

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	A．	carrying out		B．	having carried out
	C．	carried out		D．	being carrying out

8．Peyton，an 11-year-old boy from Florida，has the enthusiasm of scientific invention and the-gift of Thomas Edison．
The sixth-grader put his math and science skills as well as some real-life experience to use and created something that could benefit our world a lot--the sandless sandbag．Today he was named the winner of the Young Scientist Challenge for his sandbag．
"I had a really terrifying experience with a hurricane，"said Peyton．"When I was 4，I experienced Hurricane Wilma．When it hit Florida in October 2005，my family and I crowded in a closet and watched the storm bring damage and death to our area，feeling terrible and hopeless．"
Saltwater flooding caused great damage，which made him think about how people can prepare for floods．Peyton，who has been solving math problems since he was 3，eventually came up with the sandless sandbag．
"Instead of filling it with sand，I filled it with just the right amount of chemicals and salt，"he said．"What's amazing is that when you pick these bags up and they're not wet，they only weigh a pound or two．"
Unlike regular sandbags，Peyton's is light and easy to carry．They only expand when doused （浸泡）with water．The bags are portable when dry and will not float away when wet．
Experts praised his invention and said that the sandless sandbag could someday save a lot of lives and possessions．"He understands the big picture．He thinks in terms of the influence on society and safety for the people around this area，"said Dr．Antonio，the engineering chairman at the University of Miami．"We'd love to have him at our university．"
Peyton has to get through middle school and high school first，but until then，the young scientist will continue thinking and inventing．
46．Why did Peyton win the Young Scientist Challenge？D
A．Because he is interested in scientific invention．
B．Because he has the gift of Thomas Edison．
C．Because he solved many maths problems．
D．Because he invented the sandless sandbag．
47．What inspired Peyton to invent the sandless sandbag？A
A．An experience in Hurricane Wilma．
B．Others'scientific invention．
C．An idea of Thomas Edison．
D．His maths and science skills．
48．What makes Peyton's sandbag different from a regular one？B
A．Outlook of the bags．
B．Content of the bags．
C．Material of the bags．
D．Usage of the bags．
49．when the sandless sandbag is wet，it willC．
A．be portable    B．float away    C．get heavy D．1ose weight
50．We can infer from the passage thatD
A．Peyton has been admitted into the University of Miami
B．Peyton's sandbag has saved a lot of lives and possessions
C．Peyton has drawn a big picture of his sandbag
D．Peyton's sandbag could protect people from flooding better．

5．You can't appreciate happiness _______ you have experienced sadness too．（　　）

12．Albert Einstein offered us more than just the amazing theory of relativity and E=mc2．Through his persistence in his discoveries in science，Einstein shined a light on how each of us can do the impossible by working hard，experiencing failure，and valuing people．（36）E
●Simplify Your Work
"If you can't explain it to a six years old，you don't understand it yourself．"-Albert Einstein
The more complicated you have to make something seem，the more you do not understand the inner workings of it．（37）GDid they make even the most complicated topics full of vocabulary that you did not understand or did they make it easier to understand by simplifying？
●Live in the Present
"I never think of the future-it comes soon enough．"-Albert Einstein
（38）F．You can try to get yourself worried about the future and make plans that may not work out according to plans．What matters most is living now，today．Do your best right now and do not worry about tomorrow．
●Work Towards the Impossible
"Only those who attempt the absurd（荒谬的） can achieve the impossible．"-Albert Einstein
If it seems ridiculous to others and you are willing to take the risk，then you are able to achieve the impossible．（39）CYou complete what was once an obstacle．
●Value People
"Life isn't worth living； unless it is lived for someone else．"-Albert Einstein
If you put people first，they will value you and consider you a person who genuinely cares about others．（40）AShow them that you value them．Thank them and send compliments their way．It will not only make their day better，but they will appreciate it and remember what you have done for them．

A．Spend at least a few minutes out of your busy day talking with people without any distraction．
B．Scientists in different fields are interested in the unique theory of relativity．
C．When you go beyond what others think is reasonable，an amazing thing starts to happen．
D．Think differently，and you may find your answer．
E．Even if you are not a scientist，you can apply these life lessons to your own life．
F．You are only guaranteed the moment that you have right now，at this moment．
G．Think about the best teachers that you have had in your life．

The Ocean Awareness Student Contest(International)

We invite middle and high school students from around the world to attend the 2017 Ocean Awareness Student Contest! The theme is Making Meaning out of Ocean Pollution, and it challenges you to research, explore, explore interpret, and say something meaningful about the connections between human activities and the health of our oceans.

This year, we challenge you to concentrate on one type of ocean pollution and “make meaning” of it through art, poetry or film. We encourage you to connect it with your own life, your own local community, or something else that is personally meaningful to you, but what’s most important is to pick a topic that inspires you.

To take part:

(1)Research

Do research on your own. Ask tough and complex questions, and think about the way science and society help you explain the topic

(2)Create

To explain your topic, create your own work of art, writing, poetry or film.

(3) Submit(提交)

The closing date for entries is on June 13, 2017, at 11:59pm.

Submit as an individual: This means that you are the only creator of your submission .

Submit as a group: Groups can be of unlimited size, but you must provide the names of each group member. There will be one group leader who will be the contact(联系)person for the group and prizes will be awarded to the group as a whole.

Prizes:

The winners will receive scholarships (up to $ 1,500), and each year we give out over 140 prizes(totaling up to $80,000) as well as chances to the winners to work with us and to get their works exhibited and published.

1.The purpose of the contest is to______.

A. encourage more people to explore the ocean

B. direct students to receive more scholarships

C. draw students’ attention to the health of the oceans

D. help students complete their works in various styles

2.The contest is designed for______.

A. college students B. teenagers

C. art students D. people of all ages

3.To take part in the contest, students are asked to______.

A. submit their works in groups

B. experience the life in a local community

C. exhibit or publish their works in advance

D. do research and explain their topics

4.Which of the following prizes is not mentioned in the passage?

A. Scholarships will be offered to the winners

B. The organizers will let the winners work with them

C. The winners will be admitted to famous universities

D. Chances are that the winners can get their works published

The word “Dutch” originally referred to Germans, and even today, the word "Deutschland" means Germany. 1. The country, which is on the coast of the North Sea between Germany and Belgium is also known as Holland.

There are many English expressions that include the word“Dutch.”2. For example, "Dutch courage" means false courage or bravery gotten by drinking alcohol. A "Dutch uncle" is a person who gives unwanted advice. A "Dutch concert" is just a lot of noise and no music. A "Dutch defense" means surrender（投降），although the Dutch never surrendered an inch of their homeland without a heroic fight.

In these phrases the English imply that the Dutch are cheap and not brave enough. 3. When most people think of Holland, they imagine huge fields of tulips（郁金香），tall windmills（风车）and children wearing wooden shoes一pleasant and positive things. So why did the English take such a contrary view of Holland?

4. But as the two countries became interested in the East Indies; they competed to control sea routes leading to the East indies and the valuable goods found there. The Dutch and the English fought three wars at sea between 1652 and 1674. In 1667. when the Dutch bravely blocked off the Thames River near London, England, the English were angry!5. Today relations between the two countries are quite friendly; but the old phrases remain.

A. Most of them have negative meanings.

B . It was during this time that the unfair war of words began.

C. Dutch is one of the closest relatives of both German and English.

D. Take advantage of any Dutch language center as you learn to speak Dutch.

E. Yet the rest of the world views Holland and the Dutch people much differently.

F. Before the 17th century, the Dutch were respected in English writing and language.

G.But in present-day English,“Dutch”refers to people and things coming from the Netherlands.

I went to the store to get some balloons and wrapping paper for a present for my daughter’s birthday. I went to stand in line and saw a lady trying to get her kids to come to the register,______them as they were taking their time picking out something. I _______to let her go before me, but she ______declined. She tried again to get her two children to get a move on. I could hear the ______in her voice.______I was paying for my items, I asked the_______if she could hold my balloons for a second.

Then I heard the _____of the lady as I guess she thought I was taking too long. What she didn’t ______was that I asked the cashier to hold the ______for me so I could get a $20 bill out for her. I turned to her and ______her the $20. At that time her kids finally got in line and were obviously_______. I advised the lady to buy some ______for herself to make her not that depressed. I told the kids to make sure mommy got flowers and they _____ . She so appreciated this random act of ______. I was happy and left the store.

Once outside the store, I was at my car_______my daughter’s gift as I would be going straight to her home as soon as I was done. This lady ______to me and asked me if she could take a picture of us ______. I agreed and she got a picture and was so ______to me. I gave her a ______and told her to be ______to herself.

1.A. scolding B. rushing C. ordering D. dragging

2.A. offered B. promised C. refused D. hoped

3.A. anxiously B. proudly C. patiently D. politely

4.A. tiredness B. sorrow C. depression D. excitement

5.A. Although B. As C. Because D. Until

6.A. cashier B. seller C. assistant D. waitress

7.A. shout B. sob C. scream D. sigh

8.A. ignore B. admit C. realize D. imagine

9.A. balloons B. items C. bag D. basket

10.A. dropped B. delivered C. handed D. threw

11.A. thrilled B. amazed C. frightened D. disappointed

12.A. flowers B. gifts C. food D. clothes

13.A. approved B. discussed C. hesitated D. agreed

14.A. beauty B. kindness C. carefulness D. spirit

15.A. A. wrapping B. cleaning C. decorating D. repairing

16.A. pulled up B. carried on C. came up D. turned out

17.A. alone B. together C. soon D. later

18.A. devoted B. kind C. friendly D. grateful

19.A. glance B. talk C. hug D. look

20.A. gentle B. mean C. faithful D. good

7．

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31．If you work as a driver in the restaurant，you mayA．
A．never pay for meals
B．pay a little for meals
C．work on weekends
D．work in the afternoon
32．If you buy the house，youD．
A．may pay more than￥150，000for it
B．must have breakfast in the kitchen
C．have to take a bath in the public bathroom
D．may live on the south side of the city
33．Any customer with a Tianjin Daily of June 1，2013will get a small present fromD．
A．every supermarket
B．People's Stadium
C．Tianjin Daily
D．Yingbin Supermarket
34．When will the concert be？C
A．Julu1，2013
B．June 8，2013
C．July 3，2013
D．June 25，2013
35．If two adults and two students want to go to the concert，the tickets will cost RMBB．
A.220yuan
B.440yuan
C.270yuan
D.370yuan．

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