Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国笔友David来信说，当他了解到人工智能（AI）Master战胜了60 位顶尖职业围棋（Go）高手后，迷上了下围棋，希望你给他一些关于提高棋艺的建议。

要点如下：

1.最好到中国参加培训班； 2．熟能生巧，尽量多在网上对弈； 3．多观看www. weiqitv.com上的国际大赛直播。

注意：1.词数100左右2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear David,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

I’m delighted to receive your letter, in which you have told me you have become a Go addict after knowing Master had defeated 60 world-top professional players and ask for my advice on how to learn Go well. Here are some tips for you.

First, it is a good idea for you to register for a training class in China, where Go was born. In addition, as the proverb says, practice makes perfect. So you are expected to play the game online as much as possible. Finally, I recommend that you watch more live broadcasts of international matches at www. weiqitv. com, which is sure to help you acquire advanced Go-playing skills.

I hope you will find these ideas beneficial.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是给美国笔友David回信，给他一些关于提高棋艺的建议。文章给出了提纲。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全，文章中的3个要点要表述完整。(2)人称使用要恰当，使用第一人称。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：非限制性定语从句…，in which you have told me you have become a Go addict…；宾语从句…ask for my advice on how to learn Go well.；关系副词引导的非限制性定语从句…a training class in China, where Go was born.；虚拟语气以及非限制性定语从句I recommend that you watch more live broadcasts of international matches at www. weiqitv. com, which is sure to help you acquire advanced Go-playing skills. 2.使用了过渡词语：First，In addition，Finally等。3.使用了重要短语及谚语：ask for请求，要求；谚语practice makes perfect熟能生巧。