题目内容
假设你是李华，最近你的美国笔友杰里（Jerry）来信说他的一个室友经常听音乐到深夜，导致他无法入睡。他很苦恼不知该如何解决这个问题。请你给他写一封回信，提出你的建议。
注意：词数120左右；
One possible version：
Dear Jerry,
Thank you for your trust in me. I understand you are feeling upset now. I’d like to offer you some advice.
Firstly, I suggest you have a heart-to-heart talk with your roommate who stays up late at night. You should let him know that you are seriously affected by his music. Secondly, you should tell him the importance of getting enough sleep since a good rest can make both of you energetic in the day time. If you’re too shy to talk with him, you can tell him about your feelings by writing him a letter. I believe he will understand you and give up the bad habit.
I hope you’ll find these ideas useful.
【解析】这是一篇写信的书面表达，根据信中的困扰对Jerry表示安慰和理解，并给出相应的合理建议。所以考生在写作的时候要围绕信中的问题来提出合理化的建议。题目没有任何提示，所以此文的得分之高低在于考生提出建议的合理与精辟以及其语法结构的两点是否突出。无论是写信还是写电子邮件，都要注意其格式的规范性。
亮点说明：
本文采用了经典的三段论式的写法，条例清晰。开篇对Jerry的信任表示感谢，并引出建议，最后又对Jerry报以祝福，符合写信的格式。第二段中用firstly,secondly两个副词作为连接词使得文章连贯。句式的多样性也使得本文增添了几分色彩，例如I suggest you have a heart-to-heart talk with your roommate who stays up late at night宾语从句与定语从句构成了一个复合句，you are seriously affected by his music.与you can tell him about your feelings by writing him a letter.被动句与主动句的交替，if条件句的使用。词性词义的灵活应用亦是可圈可点，例如用importance替换了常见的important，用since代替了常用的because。
考点：书信表达
