Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的外国朋友 Martin 给你发来电子邮件，请你帮忙购买一些口罩。请给他回复，内容包括：

1. 已经买到，明天寄出；

2. 给他一些防疫建议（至少两条）；

3. 问候与祝愿。

注意： 1. 词数 100 左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 口罩 mask

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Martin,

I have learned from your email that you are in need of masks. I am writing to tell you that I have bought some for you and that I will mail them tomorrow.

Here are some tips for you to protect you from the virus. First of all, you are supposed to avoid going outside, especially crowded places. When you are out, be sure to wear a mask. In addition, remember to wash your hands frequently with soap under running water. What’s more, doing some sports and drinking more water will be helpful.

I hope you and your family are doing fine there. If there is anything I can do for you, please don’t hesitate to tell me.

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，表明口罩已购买并寄出，并给出防疫建议以及表达对朋友的问候与祝愿。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 表明口罩已经买到，明天寄出；

2. 给Martin一些防疫建议（至少两条）；

3.表达对Martin的问候与祝愿。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

learn from; be in need of ; protect sb from sth; First of all; be supposed to do sth; be sure to do sth; wear a mask; In addition; wash hands; What’s more; do sports.

第三步：连词成句

1. I have learned from your email that you are in need of masks.

2. I am writing to tell you that I have bought some for you and that I will mail them tomorrow.

3. Here are some tips for you to protect you from the virus.

4. you are supposed to avoid going outside, especially crowded places.

5. When you are out, be sure to wear a mask.

6. remember to wash your hands frequently with soap under running water.

7. doing some sports and drinking more water will be helpful.

8. If there is anything I can do for you, please don’t hesitate to tell me.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second，And then，Finally，In the end，At last；

2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，As well as，not only…but (also)，including；

3.表转折对比关系：Howeve，On the contrary，but，Although+clause(从句)，In spite of+n/doing，On the one hand…On the other hand…，Some，while others…，as for，so…that…；

4.表因果关系：Because，As，So，Thus，Therefore，As a result。

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改