Question

【题目】假定你是中学生李华，你的美国笔友Paul想了解一下中国的用餐习俗。请写一封英文邮件向他作简要介绍。要点如下：

1. 主人请客人先人座；

2. 使用筷子进餐；

3. 吃饭不出声响;.

4. 客人先动筷子；

5. 餐毕客人向主人致谢。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Paul,

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Paul,

You mentioned you are interested in Chinese table manners, so I’m writing to give you a brief introduction.

When a dinner begins, the host will invite the guests to get seated first.Then one major feature you should remember in China is that we use chopsticks instead of knife and fork,and everyon should try to avoid making unpleasant noise while eating. Whenever a dih is served,the guests are supposed to try it first.Of course,as guests,we should express our thanks to the host after enjoying the dinner.

Sush are the badic tips about Chinese table manners.All in all, When in China,do as the Chinese do is your best choice.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】这篇作文要求给Paul写一封邮件，介绍中国的用餐习俗。文章应用一般现在时态。文章宜分为三部分：第一部分，表明写信的目的。第二部分，介绍题目中要求的要点（1. 主人请客人先人座；2. 使用筷子进餐；3. 吃饭不出声响;.4. 客人先动筷子；5. 餐毕客人向主人致谢。）。第三部分，书信的末尾写上适当的结束语，可以表示祝愿，也可以表示期望等。

【亮点分析】词语，短语应用非常到位，顺畅。文章采用了be interested in， get seated，instead of，avoid doing，serve，express sth. to sb.，all in all等表达。此外，文章还使用了定语从句（you should remember in China），同位语从句（that we use chopsticks …and everyon should try to…）等高级句式。长短句结合，要点明确。