题目内容
【题目】请以“My Ideal Job”为题,用英语写一篇短文。内容包括:自己的理想职业;这个职业必备的性格特征;努力学习,实现目标。
【答案】
My Ideal Job
When I was still a little child, I hoped that I could be a teacher in the future. For so many years, I have been eager to teach lovely children.
Being a teacher calls for wonderful personalities, such as patience, unselfishness, communication ability, creativity, carefulness and so on. As you know, I am a patient and diligent girl. I am not only unselfish and creative, but also I can express myself clearly and freely. I think I possess the qualities of a good teacher.
Right now I am still a middle school student. I am working hard at my lessons so that I can learn more and can be admitted to a famous university in the future. Therefore, I am qualified to be a good teacher in the future.
【解析】
试题分析:考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】Being a teacher calls for wonderful personalities, such as patience, unselfishness, communication ability, creativity, carefulness and so on.这句话用了动名词作主语,As you know, I am a patient and diligent girl.这句话用了定语从句,Right now I am still a middle school student. I am working hard at my lessons so that I can learn more and can be admitted to a famous university in the future.这句话用了目的状语从句。这篇文章还用了 be eager to, call for, not only … but also … ,therefore, when等短语及关联词使文章更加连贯和添色。