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Dear Mr. Smith ,
I'd like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude to you for your generous help,without it I would not make such rapid progresses. In my eyes,you are a qualified teacher as well as a closely friend. Patient,humorous,and energetic,you are always making the class lively and interested. It was your devotion and enthusiasm which inspired us and aroused our thirst with English.
Meanwhile,I have some suggestions for you. If possibly,I hope you can introduce more Western culture,which can enrich our life or broaden our horizons. Besides,I would appreciate if you could organize some activities,for example,the English speech contest,through which we can make a better use of what we have learned.
I hope you will find these suggestions practical.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Mr. Smith ,
I'd like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude to you for your generous help,without it I would not make such rapid progresses(去掉es). In my eyes,you are a qualified teacher as well as a closely(去掉ly) friend. Patient,humorous,and energetic,you are always making the class lively and interested(改为ing). It was your devotion and enthusiasm which(改为that) inspired us and aroused our thirst with(改为for) English.
Meanwhile,I have some suggestions for you. If possibly(改为possble),I hope you can introduce more Western culture,which can enrich our life or(改为and) broaden our horizons. Besides,I would appreciate (前面加it )if you could organize some activities,for example,the English speech contest,through which we can make a(去掉) better use of what we have learned.
I hope you will find these suggestions practical.
Yours sincerely,Li Hua