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【题目】请你以“Music and Life”为题,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文,要点如下:
1.音乐无处不在,音乐是我们生活的一部分;
2.音乐的种类和形式十分丰富;
3.音乐的功能也是多种的,在不同的场合听不同的音乐,会有不同的心情;
4.我对音乐的感觉。
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【答案】Music and Life
Do you like music? Do you think music is one of the most important parts in your life? Can you imagine what life will be like without music?
As a matter of fact, music is everywhere and it is part of our life. There are many kinds of music, such as, classical music, symphony, light music, jazz, rock and roll, disco, folk music, and so on.
Music, in my mind, is multifunctional. Sometimes it can bring you to a fancy world. Music is the perfect way that you can express your different feelings and moods. Music can not only make you happy, excited, but also make you upset or calm. Above all, music is a universal language. There is no border between music. Though sometimes you don't understand foreign language, it can't still prevent you from feeling the music abroad.
I am a super music lover. Music becomes part of my life. It is one of my true friends.
【解析】本文属于提纲作文。提纲作文写作技巧:全面审题,确定层次。
1、审题:所谓审题就是要看清题意,确定文章的中心思想并围绕中心思想组织材料。
2、进行构思,列出简单的提纲,打造文章之骨架。
3、扩展成文。注意以下方面问题:避免只是用一两个句式或重复用同一词语。要灵活运用各种句式,从而增加文章的可读性。注意使用高级框架结构的句子,让文章的结构错落有致。用好连接词,做到所写文章层次分明,思路清晰,文字连贯,前后表达浑然一体。
亮点分析:通过审题可知本文是以“Music and Life”为题,因此所有内容都以音乐与生活为中心组织材料。在第一段以问句的形式提出问题,更能激起人们的兴趣。第二段,以几个简单句作为事实从而引出了音乐无处不在的事实,音乐是我们生活的一部分。 并把音乐的种类和形式作了列举。接着使用一系列的排比句更加确定了音乐的功能是多种多样的,同时在不同的场合听不同的音乐会有不同的心情,表达的淋漓尽致。在最后一段表达了自己作为一个音乐爱好者对音乐的感觉。整个文章思路清晰,一气呵成。
总之整个文章句式多变,使用多种复合句。文中运用了that引导的定语从句:Music is the perfect way that you can express your different feelings and moods;由not only…but also…引导的并列句,如Music can not only make you happy, excited, but also make you upset or calm.;由though引导的状语从句如:Though sometimes you don't understand foreign language, it can't still prevent you from feeling the music abroad.。在文章中也使用了许多连接词。如not only…but also…,though,I am a super music lover. Music becomes part of my life. It is one of my true friends.。这一切都增加了文章的可读性。