Question

【题目】假定你是李华，现就读于光明中学高二年级。目前你的学习出现了问题。面对即将到来的重要考试，你很紧张，出现一些焦虑症状（头晕、睡眠不好等）。请你用英语向某英文报编辑写一封信，希望得到帮助。

注意：1. 词数：100字左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 参考词汇：头晕—dizzy(adj.)

Dear editor,

I am Li Hua of Senior Two, Guangming Middle School. ____________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I am Li Hua of Senior Two, Guangming Middle School. I’m writing this letter to ask for help because I’m really in trouble these days.

What is troubling me is my studies. I used to be a top student in my class. But nowadays everything turns around. I can’t make any progress however hard I try. Worse still, my grades start to drop sharply. With a vital exam drawing near, I am more nervous. Feeling dizzy, I can’t sleep well. Every time I think about the exam, I will be stuck in anxiety. If this problem can’t be solved, I think I am going crazy.

Words fail to convey how depressed I am! I am at a total loss as to how to help myself out.

Would you please give me some advice? Your timely help will be highly appreciated.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达是要求写一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细研读题目所给信息，不要误解信息，也不要漏掉要点，明确自己是以哪个身份来写这封信，注意要提到自己的观点并且增加细节。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。 3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构，增加了自己的细节。运用了丰富的词汇短语，如in trouble 在困扰中，turn around变得和以前相反了，make progress有进步，vital 重要的，这个词是一个很增加亮点的小词，注意不要只会使用important，at a total loss完全不知所措。有高级句式，如What is troubling me is my studies是主语从句，Feeling dizzy非谓语形式做伴随状语。同时，Worse still等连接词的使用也使文章更加顺畅。