Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Steve来信说，他计划收藏一些有代表性的中国传统文化读本，请你推荐两本经典中文启蒙教材。根据下表提供的信息，请你给他写一封回信。

读本	千字文	三字经
收字	250句，994字	574句，1722字
价格	12元	18元
特点	全文为四字句，易诵易记，是中国影响很大的儿童启蒙读物。	内容涵盖广，“熟读《三字经》，可知千古事”。

参考词汇：

1. children’s primer 启蒙课本

2. Thousand-Character Classic千字文 The Three-Character Classic 三字经

注意：1. 词数100左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）；

2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Steve,

I’m so pleased to learn that you are collecting some traditional Chinese books.

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Steve,

I’m so pleased to learn that you are collecting some traditional Chinese books. I’d like to recommend the following two popular children's primers.

The first is called Thousand-Character Classic, which has great influence in China and is really a good one for beginners. It has 250 sentences and 994 Chinese words. As each sentence is made up of 4 words, it’s easy to memorize and recite. The other is The Three-Character Classic and it has a collection of 1,722 words. The content of this book covers a wide range of topics. By reading it, you can have a good knowledge of what has happened in the history of China. Of the two, The Three-Character Classic is a little more expensive, costing 18 yuan, while Thousand-Character Classic costs 12 yuan.

Please let me know if you want me to buy these books.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是提纲作文。高考中提纲式作文非常常见。下面是写提纲式作文的一点技巧。

　 1、审题。审题就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想、主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。

　 2、进行构思，列出简单的提纲，打造文章之骨架，安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。

3、扩展成文。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题，千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。

扩展成文时还需注意以下方面问题：避免只是用一两个句式或重复用同一词语。要灵活运用各种句式，增加文章的可读性；注意使用高级框架结构的句子，让文章的结构错落有致；用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。

亮点分析：第一段中使用了宾语从语：I’m so pleased to learn that you are collecting some traditional Chinese books.，简明扼要点明写信的原因。

第二段中一开始就用一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句which has great influence in China and is really a good one for beginners.。原因状语从句：As each sentence is made up of 4 words, it’s easy to memorize and recite.。使用了by引导的非谓语和一个名词从句：By reading it, you can have a good knowledge of what has happened in the history of China。及由while连结的状语从句。在本段中使用了许多高级词汇如：Have great influence，cover a wide range of topics，have a good knowledge of，a little more expensive。

最后一段使用祈使句+由if引导的状语结束了本文。Please let me know if you want me to buy these books.

总之，整个文章结构完整，内容齐全。句式多变，既有定语从句，名词从句，也有状语从句。既有简单句又有复合句，句式多变。同时使用了一些高级词汇，让文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，浑然一体。