Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的美国老师Miss Morgan要求你们明天下午去听一个有关美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向Miss Morgan请假。

内容要点：

1.表示歉意；

2.理由：去机场接从法国回来的舅舅；

3.询问：是否有录音,以便补听讲座。

注意:

1.词数100左右；

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Miss Morgan,

I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. My uncle is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30 tomorrow afternoon.

I am very interested in American society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and make up for what is covered in the talk. I would appreciate it if you could allow me to ask for a leave of absence.

Thank you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文要求写一封短信请假。成文时要注意：1.文章用第一人称；2.时态：现在时；3.文章的内容要点要齐全：（1）表示歉意；（2）理由：去机场接从法国回来的舅舅；（3）询问：是否有录音,以便补听讲座。4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；5.注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制，100单词左右。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了宾语从句that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. if it is possible for the talk to be recorded宾语从句what is covered in the talk. I would appreciate it if...句型。