Question

【题目】快餐在现在的中国很流行，但快餐对人的身体却没什么好处。请你根据下面要点以“Fast Food”为题写一篇英语短文。

注意：

1．快餐在中国十分流行，人们，尤其是儿童和青少年喜欢吃快餐。

2．快餐受欢迎至少有三个方面的原因；

⑴方便、节约时间；

⑵既可在快餐店里吃又可带回家吃；

⑶店里的环境干净、舒服；

3．从营养角度讲，快餐食品却不尽人意；

4. 建议：如时间来不及可考虑吃快餐，但以偶尔品尝为宜；孩子要尽 量少吃快餐。

词数100左右。 参考词汇：营养(nutrition)

Answer 1

【答案】

Fast Food

Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers.

There are several reasons for its popularity. First, it is very convenient and saves a lot of time. Second, you can either eat it there or take it away. Third, the environment of fast food restaurants is both clean and comfortable.

However, in terms of nutrition, fast food is far from satisfactory. It is usually not a balanced diet and low in nutritional value.

Fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and turn to it once in a while. It's good for people, especially children, to eat fast food as little as possible.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文要求根据快餐在现在的中国很流行，但快餐对人的身体却没什么好处。以“Fast Food”为题写一篇英语短文。成文时要注意：文章的内容要点要齐全；注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。注意文章的字数控制，100单词左右。不能使用原文语句。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了popularity，convenient，either…or，in terms of，balanced diet，as little as possible.等词汇及First, Second, Third, However等连接词。