Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是王明，将到美国参加一个英语学习俱乐部活动，你要在会上交流自己的英语学习体会。请根据要求写一篇发言稿。内容包括：学习方法、学习收获、学习困难。

注意：

1． 词数 100个左右；

2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

Dear friends,

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear friends,

In today’s world, being able to master a foreign language will be helpful in our life. Here, I’d like to share my learning methods.

First, I think it useful to learn grammar and remember as many useful sentence patterns as we can. I believe the more we read, the better our English will be. So I spend much time reading English newspapers and magazines after class, which helps a lot to improve my English. Besides, TV and radio programs are also of great help.

Learning English not only increases my awareness of foreign cultures but also helps me to communicate with English-speaking people and make more new friends.

However, sometimes I get discouraged because I keep forgetting words I have just learned. I’d like to use the opportunity to seek for your advice. Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇发言稿，写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全。通过对众多提示观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲。 在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。

亮点说明：本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如being able to master a foreign language will be helpful in our life.是动名词短语作主语。which helps a lot to improve my English是非限制性定语从句以及固定结构think it useful to do sth.。此外，文章还使用了大量短语be of great help, not only…but also, seek for等。以及副词besides, however的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。