题目内容
19.假如你是李华,刚从外国度假回来,你对度假期间的宾馆很不满意,宾馆房间小,有时没有热水,网络连接慢,食物不新鲜.请给该宾馆负责人写封信,说明情况,并要求赔偿.注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua.I stayed in your hotel a week ago.I am writing to complain about my recent stay at your hotel.I have never stayed in a worse place before.
I was disappointed with the quality of the room,it was too small.And the bathroom sometimes did not have a shower.Besides,seldom have I had such terrible food.However,I was most shocked by the bill which I was presented with on my departure.
I shall expected financial compersation of $300.Otherwise,I intend to turn to your national tourist authorities for assistance.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua.
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
And the bathroom sometimes did not have a shower.Besides,seldom have I had such terrible food.
浴室有时没有淋浴.除此之外,我很少有这样糟糕的食物.
高分句型二:
I shall expected financial compersation of $300.Otherwise,I intend to turn to your national tourist authorities for assistance.
我预计300美元的财政补偿.否则,我打算向贵国的旅游主管部门寻求帮助.
解答 Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua.I stayed in your hotel a week ago.I am writing to complain about my recent stay at your hotel.I have never stayed in a worse place before.
I was disappointed with the quality of the room,it was too small.And the bathroom sometimes did not have a shower.Besides,seldom have I had such terrible food(高分句型一).However,I was most shocked by the bill which I was presented with on my departure.
I shall expected financial compersation of $300.Otherwise,I intend to turn to your national tourist authorities for assistance(高分句型二).
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.
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