题目内容
8.假如你是学生会主席李华,为了提倡节约能源,你校决定开展"小事从我做起活动",现发出倡议.要求如下:1.倡议的理由;
2.倡议的内容.
注意:1.字数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.倡议书开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear students,
Nowadays,there exists an increasingly serious problem about waste on our campus.For instance,some of you leave the classroom with the lights on.Another case in point is that we often s ee water is left running.It is time that we took action to avoid unnecessary waste.
To start with,try to form the habit of turning off the taps and lights immediately after using them.What's more,make sure that all electric facilities are turned off in time.Thirdly,let's make the best of both sides of paper whenever possible.
In a wo rd,everybo dy should have the awareness of reducing waste and learn to save energy in daily life.
Students Union.
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
For instance,some of you leave the classroom with the lights on.Another case in point is that we often s ee water is left running
例如,你们中的一些人开着灯离开教室,另一个例子是我们经常把水留下来没关.
高分句型二:
In a wo rd,everybody should have the awareness of reducing waste and learn to save energy in daily life.
一言以蔽之,每个人都应该减少浪费的意识,学会在日常生活中节约能源.
解答 One possible version:
Dear students,
Nowadays,there exists an increasingly serious problem about waste on our campus.For instance,some of you leave the classroom with the lights on.Another case in point is that we often s ee water is left running(高分句型一).It is time that we took action to avoid unnecessary waste.
To start with,try to form the habit of turning off the taps and lights immediately after using them.What's more,make sure that all electric facilities are turned off in time.Thirdly,let's make the best of both sides of paper whenever possible.
In a wo rd,everybody should have the awareness of reducing waste and learn to save energy in daily life(高分句型二).
Students Union
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.