题目内容
14.假如你是第一高级中学的李华.你们市要举办一次招待外商的晚会,特向全市招聘晚会的主持人.你有意向参加,请依据下列要点,给负责人写封英文书信,应聘这一岗位.要点:1.希望能够当该活动的主持人;
2.个人情况介绍.
注意:1.词数100左右(开头已经写好,不计入总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua,a student from No.1 Senior School.
The reason why I'm writing to you is that I'd like to apply for the host of treating the foreign merchants in our city next month,through which I hope to realize my dream of becoming a helpful person.Besides,I think it can benefit myself in the long run.
Personally,I am qualified for the position.For one thing,I am a good organizer because I have successfully organized many parties and activities in our school.For another,I can speak English fluently and communicate with foreigners freely.Moreover,I am considered as an excellent doer.Whatever task I'm given,I am willing to accept and finish it perfectly.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
The reason why I'm writing to you is that I'd like to apply for the host of treating the foreign merchants in our city next month,through which I hope to realize my dream of becoming a helpful person
我给你写信原因是我想申请的处理在下个月我市外商主机,通过它我希望实现成为一个有用的人的梦想.
高分句型二:
For one thing,I am a good organizer because I have successfully organized many parties and activities in our school.
首先,我是一个很好的组织者,因为我已经成功地组织了许多聚会和活动在我们学校.
解答 One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua,a student from No.1 Senior School.The reason why I'm writing to you is that I'd like to apply for the host of treating the foreign merchants in our city next month,through which I hope to realize my dream of becoming a helpful person(高分句型一).Besides,I think it can benefit myself in the long run.
Personally,I am qualified for the position.For one thing,I am a good organizer because I have successfully organized many parties and activities in our school(高分句型二).For another,I can speak English fluently and communicate with foreigners freely.Moreover,I am considered as an excellent doer.Whatever task I'm given,I am willing to accept and finish it perfectly.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.
现象 | 一些学生不善书写,也不愿改善书写 |
原因 | 1.可以借助电脑,没有必要练字; 2.功课太忙,没时间练字; 3.练字见效慢,很难练好. |
你的看法 | … |
In order to arouse the students'interest in English learning and enrich our school life,we held an English Handwriting Competition.In order to arouse the students'interest in English learning and enrich our school life,we held an English Handwriting Competition(高分句型一).Many students took an active part in the activity.However,some students who are poor at handwriting don't want to improve their handwriting.The reasons are as follows:
On one hand,they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer(高分句型二).On the other hand,they believe that they are too busy with their studies to find time to practice.Besides,practicing handwriting is so difficult that they can't make great progress in a short time.
In my view,Students'beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to themselves.What's more,good handwriting is always appreciated by people,especially by teachers.Therefore,more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future..