Question

10．开放作文
  请根据下面提示，写一篇短文．词数不少于50．
     In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

Answer 1

分析 本文为看图作文，主题是"不管面对多大困难，始终要坚持不懈，百折不挠，成功定会到来"．写作时可按"二段式"来写，首先描述图片点明主题，然后分析概述其含义，发表感想．基本时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主．重要短语：struggle all the way  （一路奋斗…..），remind sb of sth （提醒某人某物），give up （放弃），try one's best to do sth （努力做某事），succeed in sth（成功做某事），be faced with （面临，面对）．

解答 In the picture，between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree．【高分句型】Unlike most trees，this one bends in the middle，struggling all the way up to get more sunshine．【高分句型】（描述图片）
The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable conditions．【高分句型】Faced with difficulties，they never give up but try their best to find a way out．【高分句型】Life can be hard．But if we have the courage and determination，we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does．（理解图片）

点评 写作看图作文时，首先认真看图，结合图片和文字，确定所要表达的主题是什么，然后围绕主题，提炼要点，合理想象，对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词使表达连贯．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．