Question

16．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书．你校现在需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息．内容主要包括：
1．教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英语等
2．授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）
3．工作量：
-每周12学时，任选三门课
-担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）
注意：
1．字数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上．
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Dear Peter，
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China．Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students． If you come，you can choose three of the following four courses：Speaking，Writing，Britain Today and American Today，and teach of English learning experiences． Besides teaching，you will also work as an advisor to our students'English club or our school's English newspaper．
Please tell me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions．I'd be more than happy to help．
                                                                        
Best，
 Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是应用文，根据所给要点给美国笔友Peter层写一封信，希望他来中国教书．主要要点：1．教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英语等2．授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）3．工作量：-每周12学时，任选三门课-担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第二和第三人称为主．时态为一般现在时．重要短语：be interested in（对…感兴趣），look for（寻找…），work as （作为，充当，担任），write to…（写信给…），further information．（进一步的信息），know about sth （知道，了解…）．

解答 Dear Peter，
     I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China．Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students．（授课对象）If you come，you can choose three of the following four courses：（工作量：任选三门课） Speaking，Writing，Britain Today and American Today，and teach of English learning experiences．（教授课程） Besides teaching，you will also work as an advisor to our students'English club or our school's English newspaper．（工作量：担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问）
     Please tell me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions．I'd be more than happy to help．
Best，
Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．