Question

【题目】请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The earthquake affects the students of the destroying areas in many ways. How can we help them? One expert says the child will have feelings of fear, angry and feel they are not safe after the quake. They will find it hardly to focus. They will tend to cry and shout and tremble. And they might be afraid to be alone. The teenagers will find it difficulty to live in a balanced way. If things get worse they might not be able to concentrate to their studies. He also says we can do something help the children. The first thing we can do is that to build up trust with them, and be their friends. Then you have to give them sense of safety. Thirdly, try to satisfy their psychological needs. Be a good listener, if he or she need to talk.

Answer 1

【答案】1. destroying ---destroyed

2. child---children

3. angry----anger

4. hardly----hard

5. difficulty----difficult

6. (focus) to --- on

7. do something help中help前加to

8. the first thing is that to 中去掉that

9. safe----safety

10. need----needs

【解析】1. 被破坏地区，应该用过去分词，地区与破坏之间为被动关系。

2. 专家们说孩子们会害怕，生气。。。，不是一个孩子，所以用复数。

3. feelings of fear, angry，介词of后要用名词，所以用anger，不用angry。

4. 他们发现很难集中注意力。Find it hard to focus 此句中hard作宾语补足语，用形容词。

5. 青少年发现很难生活的平衡。Find it difficult to live in 此句中也是用形容词做补足语。

6. concentrate to搭配错误，应该为concentrate on

7. 他总是说我们能做些事情来帮助孩子们。To do 不定式做目的状语。

8.The first thing is to do...此句中不定式作表语，不需要that

9. 给他们一种安全感。 A sense of safety……

10.if he or she need to talk. 此句中need用第三人称单数。