Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim询问你高考之后对大学生活和学习会有哪些准备。请你给他回邮件，内容包括：

1.对大学生活和学习的准备；

2.进行这些准备的理由。

注意: 1.词数不少于50；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I would very much like to share my holiday plans with you. Last week, you asked about how I was preparing for my future college life. Now, I’d like to tell you.

As for my future life at university, I’ve decided to take gardening as my major and hope to be admitted to China Agricultural University. Because I’m very interested in planting flowers and have been taught by my mother how to take care of them, I want to learn more in the future. This vacation, I plan to read some books about botany to equip myself with more knowledge. I will also work in Beijing Botanical Garden as a volunteer to learn about landscape architecture. All of these preparations will definitely enrich my horticulture experience, which will make my college studies much more enjoyable.

I wonder what you will do this holiday. Maybe you’d like to share your plans with me in the next email.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim询问你高考之后对大学生活和学习会有哪些准备。请你给他回邮件，内容包括：1.对大学生活和学习的准备；2.进行这些准备的理由。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：share my holiday plans with you（和你分享假日计划）；As for my future life at university,（至于我未来的大学生活，）；how to take care of them（如何照顾它们）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。