Question

7．下面短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改某个单词
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
 
Last Saturday，I went to visit the museum with my classmates．We were interesting in dinosaurs，but we came to the Dinosaur World first．There we see many fossils of different kind of dinosaurs．We were both amazed when the guide showed us some dinosaur eggs which they were laid about 9.5 million years ago．
Then we came to another hall，where many old Chinese inventions were in show．When I saw thiose old things，I felt proud of being Chinese．I think the visit very meaningfully．I should study harder to be inventor in the future and make contributions to build our great motherland．

Answer 1

分析 上个星期六，我和同学们去参观博物馆．我们对恐龙感兴趣，就先去了恐龙世界．在那看到了很多化石，当向导给我们展示九百五十万年前的恐龙蛋时，我们都惊呆了．我们还去参观了古老的中国发明，我们都为身为中国人感到自豪．我一定努力学习，为建设我们伟大的祖国而作出自己的贡献．

解答 Last Saturday，I went to visit the museum with my classmates．We were interesting in
                                                                                                            interested
dinosaurs，but we came to the Dinosaur World first．
                 so
There we see many fossils of different kind of dinosaurs．
              saw                                     kinds
We were both amazed when the guide showed us
             all
some dinosaur eggs which they were laid about 9.5 million years ago．
                                       去掉
Then we came to another hall，where many old Chinese inventions were in show．
                                                                                                         on
When I saw thiose old things，I felt proud of being Chinese．I think the visit very meaningfully．
                                                                                                                         meaningful
I should study harder to be∧inventor in the future and make contributions to build our great motherland．
                                      加an                                                                     building
1．interesting改为interested．句意表达的我们的感受，要用过去分词．现在分词表示事物的特征．
2．but改为so．句意表达的是承接，不是转折．
3．see改为saw．文章讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
4．kind改为kinds．句意表达的是不同类型，要用复数．
5．both改为all．句意表达的是我们所有人，要用all．both指两个人．
6．they去掉．题干在which引导的是定语从句，which在从句中充当主语，they多余．
7．in改为on．短语搭配，on show演出，展示．
8．meaningfully改为meaningful．题干中meaningful是作宾语补足语，要用形容词形式．
9．加an．题干中inventor可数名词，表示泛指，又是以元音开头的，要用an来修饰．
10．build改为building．短语搭配，make contributions to为…做贡献，to是介词，后面要接名词或动名词．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．