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15．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
     2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计．
    There is nothing I like more than reading．I like different forms of literature-novel，short stories and so on．I like to read whatever I have a bit of quiet time--like early in the morning，during lunch hour，and at night when I'm lying in the bed．I usually read in a small study next to his living room．It's like a small library with good natural sunlight．I really don't enjoy reading in coffee shops or public places．I need quiet space to read．Besidc books，I often skim through magazines and newspapers，and I am fond of do the puzzles．They are fun and interesting．I collect articles from newspapers for useful information or recipes．For me，reading was a spiritual experience that gives me great person satisfaction．Television and movies can't do that．I can't think about any better way to relax and forget the pressure of each day．

Answer 1

分析 本文作者主要介绍了自己最大的爱好---阅读．只要有一点空闲的时间，他就会去看各种形式的文学小说，短篇故事等，也经常地浏览报纸和杂志，作者认为阅读是一种给了他极大自我满足感的精神体验，它是使自己得到放松并忘记每一天压力的最好的方式．

解答 There is nothing I like more than reading．I like different forms of literature-novel，
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1．将novel改为novels   考查名词的单复数  此处指不同形式的文学小说，并不仅仅指一本或一种小说；故用名词的复数形式 
2．将whatever改为whenever  考查连词的用法   根据句意可知，此处在句中作时间状语，意为：无论什么时候，只要我有一点安静的时间，我都喜欢阅读，故用whenever
3．去掉the    考查固定短语的用法    固定短语lie in bed意为：躺在床上；故去掉the
4．将his改为my   考查人称的一致性   根据句意"我通常在紧挨着（我的）客厅的小书房里看书"可知，主语I对应的形容词性的物主代词应是my，指"我的客厅"；故用my
5．public前加other   考查形容词的用法   由于"coffee shops咖啡馆"也属于公共场所，故此处应将其排除在外；本句的意思应是：我真的不喜欢在咖啡馆或其他的公共场所看书；所以应在public前加other"其他的"
6．将Beside改为Besides   考查介词的用法区别     介词beside"在…旁边"；besides"除了…之外"；本句的意思是：除了看书之外，我经常浏览报纸和杂志；故用Besides
7．将do改为doing      考查动名词的用法     由于此处用在介词of 之后作宾语，故用动名词形式doing
8．将was改为is      考查时态  由于本文主要介绍了作者喜欢阅读，并且使用的都是一般过去时；此处表达的是作者对阅读的看法，即阅读是一种精神体验，故用一般现在时；由于主语是动名词reading，故用is
9．将person改为personal   考查形容词的用法    此处用来修饰名词 satisfaction；意为：自我满足；故用形容词personal 
10．将about改为of     考查固定短语的用法    固定短语think of 记起，想起；think about 考虑；本句的意思是：我想不起任何更好的方法来放松和忘记每一天的压力；故用of

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．