Question

【题目】阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

A middle school in Yueyang in central China's Hunan province charges students 1 yuan per day for napping in lunch break. Students had to pay 138 yuans per semester after the school enforced a compulsory hour-long midday break from 12.40 to 1.40 pm. But students could only nap at their desks, in classrooms with no internal heating system.

Meanwhile, students were asked to pay around 400 yuan per person for extra-curricular lessons during winter vacations. The authority also revealed that the school has also asked parents to buy their Parents' Guidebook priced at 29 yuan. Students also had to pay 30-yuan per semester for drinking water.

The school later justified charging a fee, saying that the money was used to gave an extra bonus to the teachers, who had to sacrifice their lunch break to watch over the students as they napped.

School added that some students live far from the school and therefore cannot go home during the mid-day break.

写作内容：

1. 请你以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 请你以约120词谈谈你的看法，内容包括：

1) 学校应该退还乱收的费用；

2) 学校应该努力去改善学生的休息条件；

3）学校应该教育学生遵守纪律。

【写作要求】

1、作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。

2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

参考词汇：arbitrary educational charges 教育乱收费

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Students have to pay 1 yuan per day for napping during lunch break but they can only nap at their desks. At the same time students have to pay the water they drink and some other extra fees.

I think these belong to arbitrary educational charges and this phenomenon should be forbidden. The teachers should get paid for what they have done, but the money should be provided by the school, not the students. I think the school authority should take some measures immediately. First of all, the school is supposed to return these extra fees to students and think of ways to provide students rooms for napping for the students’ health sake. At the same time they should educate the students to obey school rules and try not to make noise during lunch break. The school can organize some volunteers to be responsible for the order during sleeping time.

【解析】

本文是一篇议论文。成文时：1.篇章布局：根据内容要求可以分为三段。开头段用大约30个字来概括材料内容，表明自己的观点，尽量使用涵盖信息量大的长句； 2.时态：发表观点看法时使用一般现在时。3.恰当使用连接词或者插入语以使文章内容连贯，层次分明。4.尽量使用高级词汇和多种句式，以提高文章的档次。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言通顺流畅。在文中作者使用了一些短语，如 first of all ,be responsible for, take measures to do , get paid 等等，还使用了宾语从句what they have done，并列句At the same time they should educate the students to obey school rules and try not to make noise during lunch break.等。