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【题目】请根据以下信息，介绍中国的伍迪艾伦——冯小刚。

参考词汇： 伍迪艾伦Woody Allen 美国著名电影导演 elevate 提升 bankable有票房潜力的

姓名： 冯小刚 出生年月： 1958年3月18日

职业： 导演，演员 自比美国导演伍迪·艾伦

著名作品：《大腕》"Big Shot's Funeral"；《唐山大地震》"Aftershock"《天下无贼》"A World Without Thieves"

影片介绍：《唐山大地震》总票房收入超过了1亿47100万美元，这创下了中国电影的最高历史纪录，也使冯小刚一跃成为中国最有票房号召力的导演。

观念： "我觉得，观众不是上帝，我们也不是高高在上。我只是觉得，我们都身处在一个公平竞争的环境。

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One possible version:

Feng Xiaogang, a famous film director and actor who compares himself to the American director, Woody Allen , was born on March 18th ,1958. He has made many famous films including "Big Shot's Funeral", "Aftershock", "A World Without Thieves" and so on. Of all his films, the disaster movie "Aftershock" took over $147 million at the box office in China , making it the highest grossing film in China’s history . In addition, it also elevated Feng to the position of the most bankable director in China. When interviewed, he said "I don't think that the audience is God. and nor do I think we are above them; I just think that we are on a level playing field."

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