Question

【题目】假如你是一名大学一年级新生叫李华，对近年来大学毕业生就业情况颇有已见，请根据下面提供的信息向报社写信谈谈你的看法，其中包括以下要点：

1. 学生心态向往城市，不愿下乡；

2. 就业现状城市人才过剩，农村渴求人才；

3. 就业前景农村天地广阔，可施展才华。

参考词汇：大学一年级新生 freshman n.就业 occupation n.

注意：1. 信的开头和结尾已经给出；

2. 必须包括以上要点，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 词数100左右，不包括开头、结尾。

Dear editor,

I am writing to you to talk about college graduates’ occupations.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I am writing to you to talk about college graduates’ occupations. Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.

As a matter of fact, there are not enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us. Rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.

Therefore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。文章主要对近年来大学毕业生就业情况，说说自己的看法。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

要求：1. 表明写信目的

2. 表达自己的看法

1). 学生心态向往城市，不愿下乡；

2). 就业现状城市人才过剩，农村渴求人才；

3). 就业前景农村天地广阔，可施展才华。

3. 表达祝愿

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

college graduates’occupations; look forward to; be willing to; in the countryside; as a matter of fact; talented people; put your abilities to good use; make greater contributions to; therefore

第三步：连词成句

1. I am writing to you to talk about college graduates’ occupations.

2. Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.

3. As a matter of fact, there are not enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us.

4. Rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.

5. Therefore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第四步：润色修改