题目内容
6.某国际网站倡导低碳生活(low-carbonlife),开设了一个论坛,希望大家发贴,交流低碳生活方式.请你在该论坛发一个帖子,帖子必须包括如下内容:?•简要介绍你倡导的一种低碳生活方式?
•这种低碳生活给你带来的好处.
分析 这是一篇开放式作文,写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文.需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.
To help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.(高分句型一)句中使用了to help with the environment作目的状语
Besides,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.(高分句型二)句中使用了that引导的限制性定语从句
If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place.(高分句型三)句中使用了if引导的状语从句
解答 Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.(高分句型一) Besides,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.(高分句型二) I think it's my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we'd better not spend much money on expensive clothes.If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place.(高分句型三)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.