Question

1．请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文．
No one can go back and change a bad beginning； but anyone can start now and create a successful ending．
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数不少于120．
Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school．Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom，I found the teachers patient and considerate．【高分句型】Besides，I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class．I decided to make the best of it．I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates．Whenever I had difficulties，they were always available．Soon，I became one of the top students in my class，which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated．【高分句型】（具体事例）
My experience tells me that noonecangobackandchangeabadbeginning；butanyonecanstartnowandcreateasuccessfulending．（深化主题）．

Answer 1

分析 本文是开放性作文，根据所给提示，以此为话题进行思维和联想，自由发挥并结合具体事例，写一篇短文．在写作时以第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时为主．重要短语：fail an important exam （考试失败，没及格），make the best of …（充分利用），get along well with （相处很融洽），be always available（某物可利用，可得到；某人有空），the top students（尖子生），increase one's confidence （增加自信），get sb motivated（某人被激励）．

解答 Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school．Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom，I found the teachers patient and considerate．【高分句型】Besides，I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class．I decided to make the best of it．I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates．Whenever I had difficulties，they were always available．Soon，I became one of the top students in my class，which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated．【高分句型】（具体事例）
    My experience tells me that no one can go back and change a bad beginning； but anyone can start now and create a successful ending．（深化主题）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．