假如你是李华.你校正在开展安全教育.围绕中学生是否有必要带手机去学校进行讨论.请给校报编辑写一封信.介绍讨论情况并发表自己的意见．大多数同学认为:可方便与家长.同学联系,是一种时尚．大多数老师认为:中学生年龄尚小.还不能自控,用手机玩游戏.发短信浪费时间,容易引起攀比, 使用校园内公用电话．你的观点:注意:1．信的开头已为你写好． 2� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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17．假如你是李华，你校正在开展安全教育，围绕"中学生是否有必要带手机去学校"进行讨论，请给校报编辑写一封信，介绍讨论情况并发表自己的意见．
大多数同学认为：可方便与家长、同学联系；是一种时尚．
大多数老师认为：中学生年龄尚小，还不能自控；用手机玩游戏，发短信浪费时间；容易引起攀比；使用校园内公用电话．
你的观点：
注意：
1．信的开头已为你写好．
2．词数：100左右，不含已给出的字数．
3．参考词汇：攀比：vie with…在校园内：on the campus
Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school．
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分析高分句型：
句型一：
The majority of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and classmates if they have a mobile phone．大多数学生认为如果他们有手机，就更方便和他们的父母、同学保持联系．
句中含有复合句，think后是宾语从句，从句中含有if引导的条件状语从句．
句型二：
In my opinion，following the fashion is understandable．在我看来，追求时尚是可以理解的．
句中含有动名词做主语．

解答 Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school．
The majority of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and classmates if they have a mobile phone．And what's more，it's a fashion．（一种观点）
However，most teachers think that middle school students are not old enough to control themselves．【高分句型一】It is a waste of time for students to play games and send messages to each other by mobile phone．And it's easy to cause the students to vie with each other．【高分句型二】If necessary they can make phone calls by using public phones on the campus．（另一种观点）
In my opinion，following the fashion is understandable．But as middle school students，we should put all our heart into our studies．（表达作者的观点）

点评有正反观点的英语书面表达中，要明确两中不同的观点，呈现作者的观点，适当使用关联短语，使得文章连贯．