Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友 Wilson决定暑假来中国学习汉语，了解中国传统文化，时间一个月。他向你询问附近大学开设培训班的情况，请你按照下列要点给他回一封信，内容包括：

1.报名、班额、价格；

2.住宿、吃饭、交通；

3.交友

注意：1.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数

2.词数100左右

3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wilson,

I am glad to know that you will come to China lo learn Chinese and the Chinese traditional culture in the coming summer holiday. I’ll tell you something about the training class.

Thirty students make up one class, which will be given in Weifang College. You’d better apply for it two months ahead. The total price is three thousand yuan one month. The organizers will offer you comfortable accommodation in the College and you can have you three meals as well. What’s more. The canteen will supply both Chinese food and western food. It’s also very convenient for you to travel anywhere by taxi, bus or hike. What’s more, you can make many Chinese friends here.

If you have any difficulty, I’m very happy to offer you help.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】Thirty students make up one class, which will be given in Weifang College.这句话运用非限定性定语从句；It’s also very convenient for you to travel anywhere by taxi, bus or hike.这句话运用不定式作主语。文章还用了一些短语，如：be glad to，make up，had better，as well等等。最后，文章注意了语句的衔接，如What’s more等连接词起到很好的连接上下文的作用，使文章读起来自然流畅，朗朗上口。