Question

【题目】假定你是李华，2018年冬奥会将要在韩国平昌举办，现在正在全球招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请根据以下要点提示用英语给组委会写一封申请信。

要点提示：

1.个人情况：年龄、性别、学历（高中）

2.个人条件：英语好、爱好运动、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉当地情况（有方向感）

3.承诺：提供最佳服务

注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数），

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

Dear Sir./Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Li Hua. I would like to apply to work as a volunteer for the winter Olympic Games.

I am a boy/girl of 17 and I am studying at high school now. I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English fluently.

I believe I can do a good job in the Games. First, I like sports and I know the place very well. Second, I get along well with others, which is especially useful for a volunteer. Third, I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed. My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games.

Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：考查半开放性短文写作。本文只是给出部分的文字提示，考生可以用身边某个人的具体的信息填入文字所要求的内容，需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封申请信，给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。文章内容齐全，符合提示要求，语言简练，文中使用高级句子。I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English fluently.文中使用并列句；I believe I can do a good job in the Games.省略that的宾语从句；I get along well with others, which is especially useful for a volunteer. which引导非限制性定语从句；I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed. Whenever引导时间状语从句；My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games.动词不定式做目的状语。