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【题目】假定你是李华, 暑假你参加了英国游学活动,住在房东Tricia家中, 回国后给房东写一封信表示感谢, 要点如下:

1、安全抵家

2、回顾英国游学体会

3、感谢房东的帮助

4、附寄两张合影

5、表达愿望

注意:1、词数100左右。

2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3、结束语已为你写好。

Dear Tricia,

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

LiHua

【答案】

Dear Tricia,

I’ve come back home safely . Looking back to my stay in Britain, I felt so happy and satisfied. The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot . I also benefited a lot from learning together with local students. More importantly , your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British cultural adapt to the life there . So I’m so grateful to you .

By the way , attached to the letter are two photos taken with you , which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together.

You are expected to come to China soon.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析:这篇文章属于提纲式要点作文,要求学生就所给内容写一封感谢信,是学生比较熟悉的题材,体现了英语学习应该注意实用性,生活型的原则。应注意下面几点:1)注意人称,应该用第一人称的形式给房东(第二人称)写感谢信;2)注意时态的正确使用:从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点1和2时应用过去时;而其他要点则需要注意时态的替换。3)注意恰当使用逻辑词语,是各个要点间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句,因此要仔细组织语言,合理安排结构。在语言方面,要特别注意简洁明了,开头要开门见山

【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子:Looking back to回顾,impress,benefited a lot from doing受益匪浅,have a better understanding o更好的掌握,adapt to,be grateful to感激,By the way顺便,attached to附带,remind of,which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together是一句定语从句。

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I was having trouble with a bully(恃强凌弱者)at school once when I was younger. One day I eventually confided(吐露)my trouble to my grandmother. I told her that I was being bullied at school.

She surprised me a little bit when she asked me what it was about.__ 【1】__. She said she knew what it was about. She said it was because I hadn't done anything wrong and was simply being me. _2_ Why would I be bullied for not doing anything wrong?

_3__I was sure that couldn't be right. We weren't very well off(富裕的) so I had secondhand clothes,simple shoes,etc. while the other person was always in the latest fashion and had new things.

Then my grandmother explained that the jealousy(嫉妒)was not of material things but of what I carried inside—my “hidden gems(宝石)”.My grandmother said that the bully was jealous that I had so many wonderful gems hidden inside of me. __4

When I was at school the next week,I had a whole different view of the bully. I think the pity must have shown in my eyes because the bullying stopped.

__5__.And it is,I think,of great help to them when they are in such trouble.

A.I fought with him bravely following my grandmother's advice.

B.Hearing that made me feel sorry for the bully.

C.This is the message that children need to hear to increase their confidence.

D.I said that I really didn't know.

E.What the bully did was completely wrong.

F.I really didn't understand her.

G.She said that the other person wa jealous of me because of something he lacked.

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