题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华, 暑假你参加了英国游学活动,住在房东Tricia家中, 回国后给房东写一封信表示感谢, 要点如下:
1、安全抵家
2、回顾英国游学体会
3、感谢房东的帮助
4、附寄两张合影
5、表达愿望
注意:1、词数100左右。
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3、结束语已为你写好。
Dear Tricia,
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
LiHua
【答案】
Dear Tricia,
I’ve come back home safely . Looking back to my stay in Britain, I felt so happy and satisfied. The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot . I also benefited a lot from learning together with local students. More importantly , your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British cultural adapt to the life there . So I’m so grateful to you .
By the way , attached to the letter are two photos taken with you , which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together.
You are expected to come to China soon.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:这篇文章属于提纲式要点作文,要求学生就所给内容写一封感谢信,是学生比较熟悉的题材,体现了英语学习应该注意实用性,生活型的原则。应注意下面几点:1)注意人称,应该用第一人称的形式给房东(第二人称)写感谢信;2)注意时态的正确使用:从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点1和2时应用过去时;而其他要点则需要注意时态的替换。3)注意恰当使用逻辑词语,是各个要点间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句,因此要仔细组织语言,合理安排结构。在语言方面,要特别注意简洁明了,开头要开门见山。
【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子:Looking back to回顾,impress,benefited a lot from doing受益匪浅,have a better understanding o更好的掌握,adapt to,be grateful to感激,By the way顺便,attached to附带,remind of,which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together是一句定语从句。