Question

【题目】假设你是星光中学的李耀祖，每年的9月22日是“世界无车日”，请撰写一份主题为 “Let’s Ride Bicycles”的演讲稿，主要内容包括：

1. 目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；

2. 骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。

参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；节能（energy saving）

注意：1.词数：100词左右；

2.演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，该部分不计入总词数。

3.对所给提示，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Good morning, everyone,

I’m Li Yaozu from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.

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That’s all! Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everyone,

I’m Li Yaozu from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.

As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transportation, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.

How can we solve the problem then? As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.

Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to built up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us. That’s all! Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：不完属于半开放性作文，要求考生书写的要点并没有完全写出，想要考生自己整理。半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。

亮点说明：范文中高级句式的运用很出色，如as引导的非限制性定语从句As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transportation, bringing great convenience to our life.该句中还含有with的复合结构，现在分词做结果状语等等，让整个文章增色很多。