Question

【题目】 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom最近身体不舒服，来信向你询问如何保持健康。请你给他写一封回信并提出建议。（100字左右）

内容如下：

1. 注意合理饮食；

2. 多参加体育锻炼；

3. 保证充足睡眠。

Dear Tom,

How nice to hear from you!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

How nice to hear from you! In your letter you ask me how to keep healthy. I'd like to give you some advice.

As we know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need large quantities of nutritious food, such as fish, beans, fresh fruit and vegetables. You shouldn't eat too much meat or too many sweets. Besides, it's good for you to take physical exercise regularly instead of studying all the time. What's more, having enough sleep is of great importance, and as a result, I advise you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not to stay up too late.

Only in these ways can you be in good health. I am hoping you will be better soon.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇书信类作文，要求写一封回信。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照方位顺序进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态和将来时。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如Only in these ways can you be in good health. I am hoping you will be better soon.是一个倒装句。比如You shouldn't eat too much meat or too many sweets写出了建议用了too much or too many等使文章更加有层次。