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3．假定你是李华，上周末和同学到家乡附近的景区游玩，看到许多令人啼笑皆非的标志牌，比如：景区大门的"入口"被译成import；景区"出口"被译成export．李华给在美国的笔友Tom写信寻求帮助，主要内容如下：
（1）陈述家乡景区英语翻译的问题；
（2）希望今年暑假Tom能再来中国，和你一道去景区纠正英文翻译．
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom，
How time flies!It has been almost a year since your last visit．Last Sunday，I paid a visit to one of the scenicspots in my hometown．The moment I reached the gate，I was puzzled by a sign，which reads"import"．（高分句型一）"What does it mean？"I asked myself．It suddenly dawned on me that it referred to"Entrance"．I had a good laugh over it．When I came to the exit，I was shocked by another word"Export"．It was then that I felt obliged to do something about it．（高分句型二）
Given the fact that you are expert in English，I sincerely invite you to my hometown during the summer vacation．（高分句型三）I'm firmly convinced that you are more than delighted to do your part in promoting the standard English．（高分句型四）Let's make joint efforts to correct the shabby English，and undoubtedly it must be fun and meaningful．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息给在美国的笔友Tom写信寻求帮助，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）陈述家乡景区英语翻译的问题；（2）希望今年暑假Tom能再来中国，和你一道去景区纠正英文翻译． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：pay a visit to拜访；The moment 一…就；refer to 指的是；look forward to盼望；make efforts to不遗余力地去做；
The moment I reached the gate，I was puzzled by a sign，which reads"import"．（高分句型一
It was then that I felt obliged to do something about it．（高分句型二）
Given the fact that you are expert in English，I sincerely invite you to my hometown during the summer vacation．（高分句型三）
I'm firmly convinced that you are more than delighted to do your part in promoting the standard English．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Tom，
     How time flies!It has been almost a year since your last visit．
     Last Sunday，I paid a visit to one of the scenic spots in my hometown．The moment I reached the gate，I was puzzled by a sign，which reads"import"．（高分句型一）"What does it mean？"I asked myself．It suddenly dawned on me that it referred to"Entrance"．I had a good laugh over it．When I came to the exit，I was shocked by another word"Export"．It was then that I felt obliged to do something about it．（高分句型二）
     Given the fact that you are expert in English，I sincerely invite you to my hometown during the summer vacation．（高分句型三）I'm firmly convinced that you are more than delighted to do your part in promoting the standard English．（高分句型四）Let's make joint efforts to correct the shabby English，and undoubtedly it must be fun and meaningful．
     Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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