Question

8．假如你是李华，你校即将举行一年一度的"校园书市 （a campus book fair）"活动，其目的是给同学们提供一个交换、利用图书的机会．请你用英语写信给你的加拿大笔友Mike，介绍此次活动的有关情况．
内容应包括：
（1）活动目的；
（2）活动内容：买书，卖书，交换图书；
（3）．活动意义．
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mike，
How are you doing these days？
Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make use of their books，the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school．（高分句型一）The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school，who are to sell，purchase and exchange their second-hand books with their peers．（高分句型二）As a regular visitor，I've found myself increasingly attractedby the fair．For one thing，the fair exhibits books of hundreds of types ondiverse topics，motivating us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons．For another，most books are sold at a lower price than what the bookstores offer．（高分句型三）
Please let me know if you have any suggestions on how to host such a book fair better．
Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，首先写"校园书市"活动的目的是给同学提供一个交换、利用图书的机会；其次写活动的内容买书，卖书，交换图书等；最后写活动的意义．如：激励我们提高阅读习惯，帮助我们拓宽视野，买到便宜的书等．
【相关语法点提示】have a chance to do sth．有机会做某事；motivate sb．to do sth．激励某人做某事
    Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make use of their books，the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school．（高分句型一）
The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school，who are to sell，purchase and exchange their second-hand books with their peers．（高分句型二）
For one thing，the fair exhibits books of hundreds of types on diverse topics，motivating us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons．For another，most books are sold at a lower price than what the bookstores offer．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mike，
      How are you doing these days？
      Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make use of their books，the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school．（高分句型一）The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school，who are to sell，purchase and exchange their second-hand books with their peers．（高分句型二）As a regular visitor，I've found myself increasingly attracted by the fair．For one thing，the fair exhibits books of hundreds of types on diverse topics，motivating us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons．For another，most books are sold at a lower price than what the bookstores offer．（高分句型三）
      Please let me know if you have any suggestions on how to host such a book fair better．
                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．