题目内容
【题目】青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中的“最好礼物”。她认为,礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力。
假设你是李华,请用英文发帖,内容应包括:
*赞同Susan的看法
*你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么
*该礼物的意义
*期待大家回复
注意:1.词数不少于80;2.符合语言规范;3.开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
I am a high school student from China.
【答案】 I am a high school student from China and I am quite for your opinion about best gifts: the value of gifts lies in its intension so we should devote more to them. The best gift I've ever received is a book from my English teacher, Debbie, which she brought to me when she returned from her holiday in USA. The book's name is Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul: The Real Deal: Friends. I value this book because it shows me how to keep the balance of friendship in a positive way. And I must thank my favorite teacher for her care about me because she found me at loss dealing with friends at one time. Reading it, I have been inspired and balanced myself in life and study. I strongly recommend you to read it and share what you gain with me in your reply. Yours ever, Li Hua
【解析】本体是一篇应用文,具有较大的开放度。但按要求一定要写出Susan的看法,而这个看法就在试题的写作说明里:礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力。而选择什么样的角度来写一定要根据自己的生活和切身感受,且要量力而行。写作技巧:一般情况下应分三段来完成改写任务: 1 阐释Susan的观点并表示认同。 2 收到或送出的礼物的具体描写及其意义。该部分是本写作任务的重点,应多费笔墨完成。 3 表期待应另外起段完成,以便阅卷老师发现和评判内容要点。遣词造句尽量使用自己熟悉的词句。优秀学生一定要在保持正确的前提下尽量使用较为复杂的句型,如状语从句,定语从句,倒装句和适量的非谓语动词。特别强调:一定要注意卷面整洁并避免拼写错误。