题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你和父母暑假去台湾旅游,报名参加了当地旅行社Green River Travel Agency的一日团。请你写下对当日旅游服务的意见。要点如下:
(1)对导游John的服务表示感谢;
(2)一日游的景点安排合理,玩得开心;
(3)会将旅行社推荐给自己的好友;
注意:1. 词数不少于100;
2. 开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
To whom it may concern,
I have been thoroughly impressed with the service I have received. __________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】To whom it may concern,
I have been thoroughly impressed with the service I have received. Firstly, I would like to express my sincere thanks to John, the tour guide from Green River Travel Agency, for his warm service along the journey. John is good at explaining things on the timetable, as well as some related information about the places that we went to.
Secondly, the schedule for our one-day journey was thoughtfully arranged so that both my parents and I had a really wonderful time. We arrived at the destinations and saw the sights at a reasonable amount of time with great comfort. Besides, some annoying parts like forced-shopping was avoided, which has saved much of our time.
Last but not least, I would like to recommend Green River Travel Agency to my friends. It is with your great efforts that my parents and I can enjoy such a great day! Thanks again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。
第一步:根据提示可知,本文是写旅游服务意见:李华和父母暑假去台湾旅游,报名参加了当地旅行社Green River Travel Agency的一日团。要求写下对当日旅游服务的意见。要点如下:对导游John的服务表示感谢;一日游的景点安排合理,玩得开心;会将旅行社推荐给自己的好友。
第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组),如:sincere thanks, thoughtfully arranged, one-day journey, recommend。
第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【亮点说明】
范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如定语从句that we went to,定语从句which has saved much of our time。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。