题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你校外教Rita对中国传统文化感兴趣。端午节即将来临,你打算邀请她来家里过端午节。请写一份电子邮件给Rita,要点如下;
1.说明写信目的;
2.介绍端午节(时间、纪念屈原);
3.你计划的庆祝活动。
Dear Rita,
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Rita,
Knowing you have great interest in traditional Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to celebrate The Dragon Boat Festival with my family.
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional Chinese festival, falling on the 5th day of the lunar month May. It is set in honor of a distinguished Chinese poet QuYuan, who has a reputation for his patriotism and contributions to classical poetry. To help you experience the traditional festival, I sincerely hope you can come to my home and join us in our celebration. We plan to make and eat the typical food Zongzi and watch dragon boat race on TV, all of which will give you a complete taste of Chinese culture.
I have the confidence that you will have a good time here. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。从题干知道:外教Rita对中国传统文化感兴趣。端午节即将来临,你打算邀请她来家里过端午节。对此准备写一份电子邮件给他,信的内容包括:
a.说明写信目的;b.介绍端午节(时间、纪念屈原);c.你计划的庆祝活动。
文章内容要点已经给出,根据要点可分三段来写。
考生在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点:1. 通篇以一般现在时为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列和翻译。可以使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然流程。3. 由于文章是一篇电子邮件,注意文章要以简易书信的形式进行叙述。
【范文亮点】
1.文章采用了“I’d like to 我想要……”“in honor of 为了纪念”“has a reputation for 有……的声誉”“Looking forward to期待”等高分句式。
2.文章采用了“have a good time玩得开心,join in参与”等高频词组。
3.开篇使用现在分词作状语。"Knowing you have great interest in traditional Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to celebrate The Dragon Boat Festival with my family."
4. "The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional Chinese festival, falling on the 5th day of the lunar month May." falling现在分词作状语。
5.which引导非限制性定语从句,"We plan to make and eat the typical food Zongzi and watch dragon boat race on TV, all of which will give you a complete taste of Chinese culture."