题目内容
【题目】青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中的“最好礼物”。她认为,礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力。
假设你是李华,请用英文发帖,内容应包括:
*赞同Susan的看法
*你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么
*该礼物的意义
*期待大家回复
注意:1、词数120左右; 2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。
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【答案】I am a high school student from China. As for your view on gifts, I can not agree more. Here is my own experience.
The best gift I’ve received is my English teacher’s New Year’s card. On opening the card reading “My dear, just believe in yourself and you’ll make it!”, a sense of warmth crowded into my heart. For me, it’s more than a card but the trust she gave me. She believes I can, therefore, I really manage to do it. I know that it’s not the present but the thought that counts. That card reflected her concern which I’ll save forever.
Hope you share your best gift with us. looking forward to your reply.
【解析】分析试题可知,本次写作任务根据青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中的“最好礼物”――礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力。写作提示部分给学生提供了一个写作的提纲。也就是说写作应包括以下内容:(1)赞同Susan的看法。(2)你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么;(3)该礼物的意义;(4)期待大家回复。我们要根据这个写提纲,把写作具体内容列举出来。第一段表明你的观点:完全赞同Susan Beacham的观点,第二段要说出你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么;该礼物的意义;第三段期待大家的回复。确定了具体的写作内容这后,学生应考虑如何用地道的英语句式把这些内容表达出来。
本篇作文中运用了以下的句型。
形容词的比较级的否定式表达了最高级:I can not agree more. 我完全同意。
定语从句1:The best gift(that) I’ve received is my English teacher’s New Year’s card.
定语从句2:that card reflected her concern which I’ll save forever.
复杂句1:On opening the card reading “My dear, just believe in yourself and you’ll make it!”, a sense of warmth crowded into my heart.
.复杂句2: She believes I can, therefore, I really manage to do it
祈使句,and陈述句:just believe in yourself and you’ll make it!
并列句: For me, it’s more than a card but the trust she gave me.
使用句式不是……而是……:I know that it’s not the present but the thought that counts.
使用了较高级词汇:more than;make it; look forward to;as for