Question

15．高二阶段学习比较紧张，正确的学习方法尤为重要．下表显示了两位同学不同的学习方法，请简述并发表你的观点． 字数在100-120之间．文章开头已经给出．

学习方法	李华	王海	你的观点
白天	上课专心听讲，尽可能经常老 师请教疑难问题．	上课打瞌睡，漏掉了许多要点．
晚上	花较少时间完成作业，早点休息，上课经常保持旺盛的精力	花较多的时间完成作业，熬夜学习，导致注意力无法集中．

Possible version 1：
Li Hua and Wang Hai are two students of Senior Two．Both of them work hard but they have different learning methods．Li Hua listens to her teachers attentively，tries to catch everything that the teachers say in class and consults her teachers as often as possible if she has some problems．（高分句型一）Because of this，she spends less time doing her homework，so it is certain that she can go to bed earlier and she always keeps energetic in the day．
However，Wang Hai has quite a different way of learning．He likes to sit up late at night doing his homework，so he often feels sleepy in class．As a result，he misses lots of key points and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework，which makes it difficult for him to concentrate on what he is doing．（高分句型二）
In my opinion，Li Hua learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself．So I prefer her learning method．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇叙述性地议论文写作．依据表格所提供的信息，先根据提示表述李华和王海的学习方法，然后再发表自己的关于学习方法的观点．要求：词数：100～120，短文的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数．且短文需包括表中所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯．
【亮点说明】范文用了一些高级的句型，使得文章水平在一个高的层面，如：tries to catch everything that the teachers say in class and consults her teachers as often as possible if she has some problems．定语从句；it is certain that she can go to bed earlier and she always keeps energetic in the day．it 固定句式；it usually takes him more time to finish his homework，which makes it difficult for him to concentrate on what he is doing．非限制性定语从句．还采用了一些比较好的短语：as often as possible，sit up late，In my opinion等，同样有一些好的衔接词，使得文章读起来通顺，有序：However，．As a result，

解答 Li Hua and Wang Hai are two students of Senior Two．Both of them work hard but they have different learning methods．Li Hua listens to her teachers attentively，tries to catch everything that the teachers say in class and consults her teachers as often as possible if she has some problems．（高分句型一）Because of this，she spends less time doing her homework，so it is certain that she can go to bed earlier and she always keeps energetic in the day．
     However，Wang Hai has quite a different way of learning．He likes to sit up late at night doing his homework，so he often feels sleepy in class．As a result，he misses lots of key points and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework，which makes it difficult for him to concentrate on what he is doing．（高分句型二）    
     In my opinion，Li Hua learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself．So I prefer her learning method．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．