Question

【题目】书面表达(满分25分）

现在孩子和父母之间的代沟越来越深。据估计，75%的父母抱怨他们孩子不合理的行为，而孩子们认为父母太落伍。请按照要求写一篇短文：要求：1.介绍现状； 2.分析原因； 3.提出解决方法；

注意：1. 词数： 120 左右；

2. 内容充实，语言连贯通顺;

3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Nowadays, there are more misunderstandings between parents and children which is so-called generation gap.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, there are more misunderstandings between parents and children which is so-called generation gap. It is estimated that 75% of parents often complain their children’s unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old-fashioned.

The reasons for the phenomenon can be listed as follows：The first one is that the two generations have grown up at different times, thus the disagreement often arises between them. Besides, due to having little in common to talk about, they are not willing to sit face to face. What’s more, with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster, both of them can’t spare enough time to exchange ideas. To sum up, the main cause is due to lack of communication and understanding each other.

It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing,children should respect their parents. On the other hand, parents also should understand their children. All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是开放式作文，话题是父母和孩子之间的代沟，分析题目可知文章要分三段：第一段介绍情况，第二段分析原因，第三段提出解决方法。注意段落分明，要使用适当的短语和句型，让文章有档次。

【亮点】

本文较好完成了题目规定的任务，要点齐全、层次清楚、行文连贯。用词不落俗套。如用词组：as follows如下：face to face面对面. To sum up总之, due to因为，由于，还使用了多变得句型： It is estimated that …这样的固定句型， The first one is that the two generations have grown up at different times, thus the disagreement often arises between them. 这里有表语从句， with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster, 这里使用了with复合结构。It is high time that something were done upon it. 这是一个虚拟语气的句式，还有文章注重关联词的使用，如： Besides, What’s more, For one thing, On the other hand,这样使文章更连贯。