题目内容
【题目】最近，我国许多城市出现了严重的雾霾天气。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文，主要内容包括；
1. 雾霾天气出现的危害（使能见度降低，进而影响交通，对人体健康也有危害）
2. 雾霾天气出现的原因（大气污染，汽车尾气，…等）；
3. 避免出现雾霾天气的措施（较少大气污染，植树造林，等等）。
注意； 1.词数120 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇 ；雾霾 haze.
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【答案】
Recently, many cities of China were enveloped in a thick haze. Haze can cause great trouble to us. On one hand, it makes people unable to see things far away and thus affects traffic. On the other hand, haze can do harm to people’s health.
It is reported that haze is caused by many factors, of which air pollution is a major one. In order to avoid haze, we should take measures immediately. First, we should reduce air pollution. We can use public transportation instead of private cars and use clean energy. Second, we should plant more trees and grass to produce more fresh air. Only in this way can we bring back the blue sky.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，文章的要点基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。在表达要点时，要注意条理清楚，层次分明。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等。同时在列举要求的时候要使用合适的连接词，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些高级词汇：were enveloped in包围，a thick haze厚厚的阴霾，unable to不能， take measures采取措施，instead of而不是。运用了固定句型：On one hand，一方面，On the other hand另一方面； It is reported that据报道。范文中的句式多变，运用了不同的语法知识：Only in this way can we bring back the blue sky.运用了倒装句型；In order to avoid haze, we should take measures immediately.运用了目的状语。
