题目内容
【题目】阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
When I was a teenager, I got lost in a foreign country. I was in Berlin, Germany, only month-long trip in Europe. My team and I had one night there to spend however we pleased. Most of my teammates decided to stay indoors and relax. But I did not want to pass up the chance to explore Berlin.
I visited lots of major attractions around the city that night. When the exhaustion began to set in, I checked the time on my watch. I was surprised to see that it was two o’clock in the morning.
As I walked to a subway station, I realized that it was my dad’s birthday. This would be the first birthday I couldn’t celebrate with him because he died a few months earlier. Before I could begin thinking of my dad, I heard train wheels stop.
I rushed onto the train. At first, I was thankful to have made it onto the train. But that joy quickly turned to panic when I noticed that the train was heading in the wrong direction!
I looked around the nearly empty train. I saw a young woman sitting quietly by the window and approached her.
“Hi, do you speak English? I’m lost. Can you help me?” I asked.
The woman understood. She told me how to return to where I had first gotten on the train. But my anxious mind couldn’t follow her guidance.
Without thinking, I asked, “Can you come with me?”
Her face froze at my stupid request. After a long second of hesitation, she agreed to help me. At that moment, I was grateful for the kindness from a stranger.
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为100左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Paragraph 1:
On the journey back to the train station I got on, she and I chatted.
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Paragraph 2:
Finally, we reached my stop.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
On the journey back to the train station I got on, she and I chatted. Curiously, I asked her if she wasn't worried that I was the bad guy. She surprised me by saying that bad people are not so polite. Yes, my father always taught me to be polite, and I have tried my best to be a kind person all my life.
Paragraph 2:
Finally, we reached my stop. I thanked her and asked where she was going. She answered that she was going to visit her sick father. I smiled. I knew her father must be waiting for her. Somehow, I suddenly said to her out of blue, “He must have a happy day”. After all, every moment of having children around is a happy day for parents.
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。
通过阅读所给文章可知,作者在国外迷了路,作者凌晨两点钟走到地铁站时,意识到今天是爸爸的生日。这将是作者第一次不能和他一起庆祝生日,因为他几个月前就去世了。作者在火车上遇到一个陌生女子,女子答应带他回到第一次坐火车的地方。
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:在回火车站的路上,我和她聊了起来。所以后文应该是讲述他们在车上聊天的场景,谈话的内容等。第二段开头是:最后,我们到达了我的车站。本段应该写作者和陌生女子的告别内容,作者了解到女子是去看望生病的父亲,于是说女子的父亲今天一定是快乐的一天,毕竟有孩子在身边的每一刻对父母来说都是快乐的一天。
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为100左右;2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。