Question

【题目】新华中学近期组织了校园劳动周（Campus Labor Week）活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇简短的英文报道。内容包括：

1. 活动的时间与地点；

2. 活动的过程；

3. 你的评论。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】In order to enhancestudents’physicalquality, our school organized a “Campus Labor Week” activity.

It was held from May 15th to 19th in our school. Some lectures on labor skills were given on the first day, from which we benefitted a lot. Cutting trees and watering flowers were attractions to Senior One. Varieties of other labor projects gave us unforgettable experiences. Undoubtedly, not only can this event enrich our school life but also offer us opportunities to learn more daily practical skills!

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。要求你对学校组织的校园劳动周（Campus Labor Week）活动写一篇简短的英文报道。

本篇英文报道的写作要点已经给出，属于提纲关作文，内容包括：1. 活动的时间与地点；2. 活动的过程；3. 你的评论。写作时需注意四点：一是要注意时态、语态的合理运用。根据给出的要点分析，活动已经结束，所以时态上要用一般过去时。二是要详略得当，本文要点已经给出，结合要点可知，对本次活动的过程要重点去描述。三要注意适当地增加细节。展开的内容以描述本次活动带给参与者的好处为线，要和主题有关系，切勿天马行空，胡乱发展；四是恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。