题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的好友Maria今年参加高考并被香港大学录取,请你写一封电子邮件向她表示祝贺。明年你也打算报考香港大学,希望她能分享以下相关信息:
1.如何才能被该校录取;
2.是否需要参加专门的英语考试;
3.该校的奖学金,学费(tuition),食宿等情况;
注意:
1.邮件必须包括以上内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
2.词数100左右。
3.开头,结尾已为写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Maria,
Congratulations
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I am looking forward for your response and please accept my sincere thanks and best wishes.
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Maria:
Congratulations on your success in the National College Entrance Examination and I am so glad to learn that you have been accepted by Hongkong University, one of the most outstanding universities in China. In fact, Hongkong University is also my dream school. Could you help with a couple of questions about the applying process and school background information.
I wonder how I can be a student in HK university and whether I need to take some special language tests. How can I apply for the scholarship and how much will I have to pay for my education and accommodation?
I am looking forward for your response and please accept my sincere thanks and best wishes.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
本文书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封电子邮件。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇是一篇电子邮件:假如你是李华,你的好友Maria今年参加高考并被香港大学录取,请你写一封电子邮件向她表示祝贺。明年你也打算报考香港大学,希望她能分享以下相关信息:如何才能被该校录取;是否需要参加专门的英语考试;该校的奖学金,学费(tuition),食宿等情况。
第2步:根据写作要求确定关键词,如:the National College Entrance Examination(高考);Hongkong University(香港大学);school background information(学校背景消息)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。