题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,母校将为高一新生举办主题为“ What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动,特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请你为此准备一份发言稿,内容包括:
1.学会学习:方法,习惯等;
2.学会做人:真诚,友善;
3.学会其他:考生自拟。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语和结尾已为你写好。
Good morning,everyone!It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
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Thank you!
【答案】Good morning,everyone!It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school .
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly,we should learn to learn efficiently. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons,get actively involved in class,and review what have been taught after class. In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school,we should respect teachers and be friendly with classmates.Finally,we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
With your great efforts, I am sure that you will enjoy a colorful life here.
Thank you!
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一份发言稿,背景是母校为高一学生准备了主题为“ What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动,特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.学会学习:方法,习惯等;
2.学会做人:真诚,友善;
3.学会其他:考生自拟。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
challenging; efficiently; develop a good habit; be of great importance; benefit; preview; get involved in; review; get along well with; be friendly with; take part in; outdoor activities; be helpful to; build up; enrich; colorful.
第三步:连词成句
In the coming three years,our school life will be challenging.
We should learn to learn efficiently.
Developing a good habit is also of importance.
It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons,get actively involved in class,and review what have been taught after class.
We should learn how to get along well with others.
In school,we should respect teachers and be friendly with classmates.
We should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently.
They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
With your great efforts, I am sure that you will enjoy a colorful life here.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改