Question

9．如今城市共享单车越来越流行，请你就此话题谈一谈共享单车的好处．
内容要点：
1．方便快捷；
2．缓解交通压力，环保；
3．有益于健康．
注意：
1．词数：100词左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：共享单车bicycle sharing  道路拥堵road congestion．
With the development of technology，bicycle sharing is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation in many cities．
There are quite a few advantages of it．Firstly，bicycle sharing makes it convenient for people to move around．You can find a bicycle anywhere at any time when you want to go out for a cycling with a very low charge．Secondly，it relieves the traffic pressure caused by cars and buses，reducing road congestion．Meanwhile，as a green way of transport，it does good to the environment．What's more，riding a bike is a good way of taking exercise，which is helpful for people to keep fit．．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
With the development of technology，bicycle sharing is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation in many cities．
随着科技的发展，自行车共享成为许多城市交通的一种新趋势．
高分句型二：
What's more，riding a bike is a good way of taking exercise，which is helpful for people to keep fit．
更重要的是，骑自行车是锻炼身体的好方法，有助于人们保持健康．

解答 With the development of technology，bicycle sharing is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation in many cities（高分句型一）．
There are quite a few advantages of it．Firstly，bicycle sharing makes it convenient for people to move around．You can find a bicycle anywhere at any time when you want to go out for a cycling with a very low charge．Secondly，it relieves the traffic pressure caused by cars and buses，reducing road congestion．Meanwhile，as a green way of transport，it does good to the environment．What's more，riding a bike is a good way of taking exercise，which is helpful for people to keep fit（高分句型二）．

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