题目内容
【题目】假如你是吴鹏,根据以下提示给同学李维写封回信,建议如何克服考试的压力及紧张情绪。词数100个左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示:
1. 告诉他大部分同学考试前都紧张,要有正确态度;
2. 平时努力学习,做好准备,不要太在意结果;
3. 考前适当运动,如散步等;
4. 充分的睡眠有助于发挥,睡前洗个热水澡、喝杯热牛奶有助于睡眠;
Dear Li Wei
Glad to hear from you. You say you have some problems in overcoming the pressure of exams. Don’t worry. Let me give you some advice.
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Yours,
Wu Peng
【答案】Dear Li Wei.
Glad to hear from you. You say you ha\c some problems in overcoming the pressure of exams. Don’t worry. Let me give you some advice.
As a matter of fact,most of us middle school students feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. There is no doubt that exams arc important to us students, but it’s more important to have a right attitude towards them. Therefore, try to study hard every day and make good preparations for exams but don’t worry too much about the results. And I think it s good to go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercise before exams. Besides, having enough sleep can make us full of energy and make it possible for us to perform well in the exam. A hoi bath or a cup of hot milk before going to bed might help you have a sound sleep.
Don’t worry too much about exams and try to relax yourself. I am sure you will do well in the exam. Good luck.
Yours,
Wu Peng
【解析】首先审题,这篇文章要求给同学李维写封回信,建议如何克服考试的压力及紧张情绪。任务中给出的提示信息包含如下内容:1. 告诉他大部分同学考试前都紧张,要有正确态度;2. 平时努力学习,做好准备,不要太在意结果;3. 考前适当运动,如散步等;
4. 充分的睡眠有助于发挥,睡前洗个热水澡、喝杯热牛奶有助于睡眠。抓住了这亮点,我们就抓住了文章的核心内容。其次选用正确的人称和时态,考虑用一般现在时,第二人称来写。然后写出单个句子,使用正确的连词,连句成段。具体来说,写这篇文章时,要注意:1、提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充;2、为使文章层次清楚,可分三个自然段写:第一自然段安慰李维不要担心,自己会给出一些有益的建议;第二自然段找题目提示,依次给出建议;第三自然段相信李维会在这次考试中获得优异的成绩。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: As a matter of fact事实上,There is no doubt that毫无疑问。还使用了宾语从句And I think it s good to go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercise before exams.和宾语从句I am sure you will do well in the exam.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。