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【题目】假如你是李华,你的好友李娜要邀你一起去西藏旅行,但你得陪同父母去看望在乡下的爷爷奶奶,所以不能去。请以电子邮件的形式给你的朋友提一下旅行建议。1.加入旅行社,同时结伴而行;2.早晚气温较低,带上轻薄的棉衣; 3.日照时间长,带上太阳镜,遮阳帽等物品;4.空气稀薄,戴上吸氧用具。(西藏Tibet 旅行社 travel agency 吸氧用具 Oxygen inhalation apparatus)

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【答案】Dear Li Na,

I feel sorry that I can’t go to travel to Tibet with you. In the holiday of May First, I need to go with my parents to visit my grandparents who live in the countryside.

As your best friend, I’d like to give you some advice about the Tibet journey. First of all, You’d better join a travel agency and travel with others. What’s more, don’t forget to take a light warm overcoat with you ,because the temperature in the morning and at night is too low in Tibet. In Addition, you should wear sunglasses or caps against the sun when you’re out of doors because of the long sunlight time. Most importantly, the air is thin and the air pressure is low, therefore, you should take an oxygen inhalation apparatus.

Anyway, I sincerely hope you can have a good time traveling to Tibet.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文,文章要点已经给出,在写这篇文章时要注意以下几点:

1.整篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。

2.要点要齐全,但是不要进行简单的罗列,可以采用适当的连接词或者是表递进关系的副词如What’s worse、 Most importantly、First of all、Anyway,使上下文衔接自然,行文自然流畅。

3.此作最好用简单句与复合句结合的方法写作如 I need to go with my parents to visit my grandparents who live in the countryside。

4.多采用一些高级句型,如You’d better join a travel agency and travel with others等,同时使用一些词组如because of,have a good time等。

【范文亮点】

提纲性文章难点:扩充成句,因为提纲性文章主题内容已经基本列出,在将短句扩充时,要精炼。其中要注意尽量用高级词汇和复杂句是来表达,如强调句,定语从句等,就如文中 I need to go with my parents to visit my grandparents who live in the countryside。文章用What’s worse、 Most importantly、First of all这些连接词,层层递进,条理清晰,讲出了对于作文主题的建议。最后用Anyway总结,首尾呼应,文章结构紧凑再者就是要多使用一些高级词汇与词组,如文中because of,have a good time等。最后就是段落清新,层次分明

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【题目】阅读下列短文,从每题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出最佳选项。

A tender woman, or an independent one, which one would you prefer? A recent research shows that most people would choose the latter.

This type of woman is called a nühanzi (“tough woman”). Experts believe these characteristics have social and psychological roots among young females in China. Su Hao’s friends all call her a tough woman, because she can finish tough tasks usually carried out by men. For example, she carries 10-litre water to her dormitory on the 5th floor. “I depend on no one but myself,” she says.

According to a recent survey by China Youth Daily, tough women have become rather common in society. Of the 21,265 respondents, 78.5 percent said they are familiar with a tough woman. About 50 percent said they like women with tough characteristics, while less than 29 percent expressed the opposite view.

Why are tough women gaining popularity? Shen Meng, a psychological consultant, believes the fierce competition in society is contributing to this trend. “Women are often in a disadvantaged position compared to men,” Shen says. “In order to survive, they have to be independent, strong and tough.” Liu Xiaolin, professor of psychology at Wuhan Mental Health Center, believes tough women are brought up this way. They are often on close relationship with their fathers, who teach their daughters to be brave and decisive,” he says. As a result, these women are more likely to be psychologically healthy and more tolerant to stress, according to Liu.

Though Liu believes that this is a good trend, Hu Shenzhi, a psychologist at the Guangdong Sunflower Counseling Center, says the popularity of tough woman indicates an unclear line between gender identities, which can lead to relationship problems. “Some women with characteristics that differ from the traditional female image may have a difficult time finding Mr Right,” he says. “Even if they get married, their manly characteristics might cause family conflicts.

【1】Which of the followings doesn’t belong to the characteristics of a tough woman?

A. She is independent of others in daily life.

B. She can solve problems usually for men.

C. She is more tolerant to stress.

D. She is soft and tender to others.

【2】How many respondents like tough women?

A. about 21,265. B. about 16,700

C. about 10,600. D. about 6,200

【3】Why are there more tough women nowadays?

A. Because tough women are more lovely.

B. Because of the fierce competition in society.

C. Because girls often love fathers more.

D. Because more women want to be independent.

【4】What problems may tough women have in their life?

A. They may have difficulty with marriage.

B. They often suffer gender confusion.

C. It’s difficult for them to be friends.

D. They have different characteristics from traditional female images.

【题目】Are you new to experiencing relationships ? Well, let me give you some advice on how to have a healthy relationship with your partners.

1. Be an honest person with them. Don’t hide things from them, and don’t lie. Don’t be afraid to say things that aren’t flattering about yourself. Getting them to trust you is the most important thing in any relationship. If there is no trust, there’s nothing there. 1

2. Make sure you give them respect. Now, respect isn’t just simply treating them nicely. 2 You have to learn to adjust to their liking. Basically, learn to study your partner’s moods, wants and needs. Don’t just think about yourself, but think about what your partners need as well.

3. Make sure you are encouraging to your partners. Always be willing to help them and give them honesty and positive things at the time3. Make them feel you are someone they can count on and build a future with.

4. Make sure you have a good sense of humor with them. Laughter is the key to happiness. Laugh a lot with them, and joke with them4, Laughter may seem silly, but it’s the secret to a lot in life. It will keep the sparks alive.

5. Make sure the communication is good. This usually goes along with trust, so always communicate how you feel even if it’s something that upsets you. 5 If they did something that made you unhappy, tell them about it in a respectful manner. It’s important to communicate this to them, not to keep it bottled up.

A.There is a lot more to it.

B.Show them your personality.

C.Instead of screaming, talk to them.

D.Laughter keeps the relationship strong and lasting.

E.So please be honest and they’ll learn to open up to you.

F.Don’t expect too much in a relationship.

G.Your partners should be able to count on you when necessary.

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