Question

【题目】假定你是李华,最近你在一份英文报纸上看到一则游泳培训班的广告,称其有称职教练( instructor)，一周包会。你会一点游泳,但水性不太好,想在暑假参加训练.请你写一封咨询信了解相关情况,要点如下：

1. 训练的具体时间和地点。

2. 条件和费用。

3. 其他特别注意的事项。

注意

1.词数 100 左右。

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I have read your advertisement in the newspaper.

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I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Your s sincerely ,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I have read your advertisement in the newspaper. You mentioned in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week’s training.

I can swim a little but I’m not very confident in the water. So I’m interested in taking part in the training course. Fortunately, the summer holiday is around the corner. I’m writing to inquire when and where the course will be given, and how long the training course will last each day. I also want to know how much you will charge me for that. Besides, would you be so kind as to tell me whether there is anything special that should be prepared or does your company provide everything necessary?

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于应用文中的书信，要求以李华的身份向游泳培训班写信咨询暑期游泳训练情况。所以本文使用第一人称，一般现在时和将来时相间的时态。要点：1.你了解到该培训班有称职教练，一周包会。你自己会一点游泳,但水性不太好,想在暑假参加训练。2.训练的具体时间和地点。3.条件和费用。4.其他特别注意的事项。建议文章分成三段，第一段为第一点；其余三点为第二段，最后一段为文章的过渡段。在写作的时候，一定要注意使用多样化的句式，让文章富有变化。同时要多使用高级句式和短语增加文章的档次。